The Huffington Post has published a very informative article about gluten and its disruptive effects on the body. Little does Dr. Hyman know, typos have a disruptive effect too…at least they do to me. 
Simply eliminating this insidious substnace from your diet, may help you achieve lifelong vibrant health.
I love that alliterative phrase, “insidious substance”. The misspelling of substance I could do without though.
To learn more about my body, I recently underwent an elimination diet wherein gluten was eliminated for about three weeks. On the day that I reintroduced it, I found that I had to pee urgently and often. I suppose that means I have a mild-severe reaction to gluten. Has anyone else had a similar experience?
The Huffington Post has published a very informative article about gluten and its disruptive effects on the body. Little does Dr. Hyman know, typos have a disruptive effect too…at least they do to me.
Simply eliminating this insidious substnace from your diet, may help you achieve lifelong vibrant health.
I love that alliterative phrase, “insidious substance”. The misspelling of substance I could do without though.
To learn more about my body, I recently underwent an elimination diet wherein gluten was eliminated for about three weeks. On the day that I reintroduced it, I found that I had to pee urgently and often. I suppose that means I have a mild-severe reaction to gluten. Has anyone else had a similar experience?
Off the front page of The Huffington Post, the short article, “Stewart Responds to Hannity’s Apology: Nothing’s Worth Sitting Through His Show,” has a few typos I, as a slightly obsessive compulsive copywriter, must correct.
What THP wrote:
Earlier this week, Jon Stewart did a segment on Sean Hannity’s health care protest coverage in which he revealed that the Fox host had used footage of a different, larger event to make gathering look more impressive.
What I would have written:
Earlier this week, Jon Stewart did a segment on Sean Hannity’s health care protest coverage in which he revealed that the Fox host had used footage of a different, larger event to make the gathering look more impressive.
The second THP typo:
“He” came came out on stage to take a bow and…
What this seasoned freelance copywriter would have written:
“He” came out on stage to take a bow and…
And there you have it. Linguistic perfection.
